February 2nd 2021

     Today, I got feedback from Mr. Paterson for our group's google site. I thought I made my own page not bad, but there were not many corporations between the groups, so the website became a one without any unity. I thought we should have talked much more, communicate more, and checked each other's more, rather than having some individual work. 

     The first point we had to fix was the part that the layout was different from the person who made the page. I thought I had unified it, but it did not, so it was our flaw of checking. The second point was that the site was very long so that we should make more pages to separate the paragraphs, videos, essays, and others. We did not think about those things while making it, but I thought we did not think much about the person who would be reading this web page, and we did not have any ideas to make them enjoy reading it. It would be much better if we could fix the site by thinking about it from the reader's perspective. 

     I would enhance our site to make people enjoy reading it, and feel that they want to read the books we introduced.