Today, we were introduced about the writing tools. I perfectly forgot about these websites and I checked this essay for the first time, and it was horrible.
I used the same words many times, such as "write" or "strong". I changed these words to more difficult words. Also, Umeno who was sitting next to me was using the grammary premium, and let me use this to improve my work. There were many grammar mistakes and simple words, so this made me an opportunity to fix all of those things. I thought these tools are very convenient that they can support us to write better. I want to improve the book review using these tools.
Also for the slides, I thought it would be easier for the audience to understand the summary of the book when the presenter explained it with the simple timeline. In my book, there were three main settings (Hailsham, cottage, and the hospital) so I want to explain the summary separating these three parts.
I am looking forward to look at other people's slide too.
Friday, June 26, 2020
18th June 2020
Today, we learned the points to make a good slide. The slide from the senpai's, which Mr.Paterson showed us was very easy to understand, as I can recognize some of the information from the slide, even though there are no speakers. I learned many things from that slide, and I also got a motivation to make the slide.
In my slide, I put one photo in one slide and that made it difficult to understand. So, I thought to put several photos in one slide and make them pop up simultaneously while speaking. I found out it is very difficult to make a good slide, as we can not find the free photos that perfectly matches our image of the slide, and to make the audience understand the contents easily. Especially, making the slide for the story's summary was difficult because there was not much photo that matches the story.
I want to make this slide a best one in these two years.
In my slide, I put one photo in one slide and that made it difficult to understand. So, I thought to put several photos in one slide and make them pop up simultaneously while speaking. I found out it is very difficult to make a good slide, as we can not find the free photos that perfectly matches our image of the slide, and to make the audience understand the contents easily. Especially, making the slide for the story's summary was difficult because there was not much photo that matches the story.
I want to make this slide a best one in these two years.
June 4th 2020
Today, we were taught about the site that helps us understand the plot and the 3Bs of the book. Cliffs Notes and the spark notes were a site for teachers, giving information for what they need to teach to the students about the book, and thug notes was a youtube channel that explains the summary and the annalizes of the book for junior high school and high school students.
I thought these sites are use full for people like me, who are learning English as a second language. I can not understand the book perfectly just by reading the book and research the 3bs. However, I also thought there can be students who use these tools to deceive the teachers that they read the book, even though they do not. We can not say this is a bad thing as the students can have many more things to do and did not have time. Maybe, this can be a good tool for students who want to do what they want more than school homework.
To make the book review better, Cliff's notes and spark notes can support my work.
I thought these sites are use full for people like me, who are learning English as a second language. I can not understand the book perfectly just by reading the book and research the 3bs. However, I also thought there can be students who use these tools to deceive the teachers that they read the book, even though they do not. We can not say this is a bad thing as the students can have many more things to do and did not have time. Maybe, this can be a good tool for students who want to do what they want more than school homework.
To make the book review better, Cliff's notes and spark notes can support my work.
Wednesday, June 3, 2020
June 2nd 2020
Today, we were told about the many ways to have a presentation, such as Pecha Kucha, Ignite presentation, and lighting style presentation. I was late this day, so maybe there is a lack of some information. All of these ways of presentation had a limited time of one slide are there, and the presenter must speak all of the things they want to say in the limited time they have.
I did not know that there are many ways to have a presentation, so I was very interested about it. I thought it is difficult to speak all things in limited times, however, this makes the presenter eliminate the points that is not much important in the presentation, and this connects to a presentation that is clear, and easy to understand. Also, it can reduce the time, so it will be able to do many presentations in the little time.
I can imagine that it would be difficult for me to prepare a presentation, but I want to make my presentation a good one compared to last year.
-memo-
every twenty seconds, the slide changes
I did not know that there are many ways to have a presentation, so I was very interested about it. I thought it is difficult to speak all things in limited times, however, this makes the presenter eliminate the points that is not much important in the presentation, and this connects to a presentation that is clear, and easy to understand. Also, it can reduce the time, so it will be able to do many presentations in the little time.
I can imagine that it would be difficult for me to prepare a presentation, but I want to make my presentation a good one compared to last year.
-memo-
every twenty seconds, the slide changes
Pecha Kucha
six minutes forty seconds
ignite presentation
want to know more
fifteen slides, fifteen seconds
lighting style presentation
one point presentation
it is not appropriate for a book review because we can not explain everything in 2-3 minutes.
author,
summary,
three important things
critique
negative-positive-positive
smaller bigger bigger
much more passion into our voice
emphasize what we do have
facial expression
big text!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!no font ever
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