Today, we were introduced about the writing tools. I perfectly forgot about these websites and I checked this essay for the first time, and it was horrible.
I used the same words many times, such as "write" or "strong". I changed these words to more difficult words. Also, Umeno who was sitting next to me was using the grammary premium, and let me use this to improve my work. There were many grammar mistakes and simple words, so this made me an opportunity to fix all of those things. I thought these tools are very convenient that they can support us to write better. I want to improve the book review using these tools.
Also for the slides, I thought it would be easier for the audience to understand the summary of the book when the presenter explained it with the simple timeline. In my book, there were three main settings (Hailsham, cottage, and the hospital) so I want to explain the summary separating these three parts.
I am looking forward to look at other people's slide too.
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