Today was the first class after submitting the essay. Mr. Paterson pointed out that we used many of the personal pronouns, and had some grammar mistakes. I am not good at grammar, but I used Grammarly to check, and my teammate pointed out some mistakes so I did not have any comments. However, I definitely think there are some mistakes in my essay too. Also, for the personal pronoun, I was not pointed out because I enhanced my sentences and change it to not use them. Also, there were points that my teammate pointed out forme, and it was very helpful to me.
In the middle of the class, we were shown an essay from Mr.Paterson's university. The percentage of the quotation was high, and there were many quotes there. There wasn't a quotation mark, so turn it in do not recognize it is a quote. I thought it is essential to write a reference properly. Mr. Paterson said that even though the rest of the essay was perfect if the student did not write the reference properly, the assessment would be F because it means that the students are not writing that sentence.
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