Today, we had a class to make our group's essay improved. There were many points that we need to go over again, so it was difficult to correct all of the mistakes.
One of the mistakes were personal pronounces, which limit the case to use "I", "Me", and "You", which describes limited people. I was always using that, so we need to fix many places. It was difficult to use other words instead of using "I" or "Me". We were told that we can only use these words when you had exactly experienced.
For contractions, we were not allowed to use words such as "can't" or "don't", and replace tose to "can not" and "do not". I was being careful about that, so there weren't many mistakes.
The last point was the phrasal verbs. We need to shorten the sentences as short as possible, as we are writing a brochure. it was difficult to find phrasal words and also, it was hard to find a word that has the same meaning as the phrasal verbs.
There were many things that we were needed to fix to have a perfect essay, so I want to be careful to not use these things.
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