In today's class, we improved the introduction, mainly hook, and the theses statement. We were writing the introduction very boring so there were many places to improve.
Our hook was too simple and we can imagine that we can catch any readers. We did not use any of the skills to catch the reader, for example, using questions or using a word having a huge impact. Also, we used some words that describes limited people, such as "we".
For the theses statement, we were told to include a topic, claim, and the reason, but we did not write the claim clearly, and the reason specifically.
I want to make an introduction that catches the reader and have a persuasive brochure.
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