Tuesday, January 28, 2020

January 27th 2020

     In today's class, I was taught how to use Zotero by Mr. Paterson. Last class, I couldn't understand how to use it properly and I had problems at home, so it was very helpful for me. However, I can't say that I mastered using it, so I want to use it as I write an essay and master this convenient tool.
     I also edited my essay too, as I only had four paragraphs. My structure of the essay was the introduction, issue one and the solution, issue two and the solution, and the conclusion. So, I changed to write the two problems first, and show the formula in one paragraph. Making the essay long made the essay a little bit better, but I also think this structure made the essay complicated. Also, finding references was also difficult, as my problem was not that measure. So, I found the references which show the importance of saving the privacy, or appealing how important to learn in a comfortable environment.
     I would like to enhance my essay more, by using good references.

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