Today was a good class for me to improve my essay. As Mr. Paterson give advice to other students, I found some mistakes in my essay too. I felt I need to use more references and follow the basic techniques by writing an introduction and conclusion.
After this class, I checked my introduction to check the constitution of the thesis statement and the concluding sentences of each paragraph. There were some of the parts that I didn't include, such as limitations in the conclusion so it was a good chance for me to improve them.
Also, I recognized the importance of the reference. I liked the example of the best friend, that I thought I won't believe the person if they said my best friend hates me without any grounds. If we did not include any references in the essay, the essay will only be some one's imagination or some one's writing. to have a huge persuasiveness in the essay, references are essential.
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