Monday, October 26, 2020

October 22th 2020

 Today, I got feedback from Mr. Paterson. Most of my mistakes were slide mistakes, such as font size, the lack of keywords, and the point that I sometimes used more than one photo in one slide. 

 First, for the font size, Mr. Paterson said "title 50+, subtitle section headings 40+, Content, Informations, Keywords 30+, credits 20-25". When I made this slide, I did not have these points on my mind, so I would like to remember this and use this when I have an opportunity to make the presentation slide. However, I thought 30+for the keywords are sometimes too small. 

 Second, my slide had a lack of keywords. I pasted a big photo, but I did not write any keywords, so that made the audience difficult to understand the main point of the slide. 

 The third point is that I sometimes used more than two photos in one slide. Mr. Paterson said pasting two photos in one slide, that makes the audience take time to understand the meaning of the slide, and concentrate on the presenter, speaking. 

 There were many improvements in my slides, so I want to improve this for the final draft. 

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